Category: Communication

Sci-Fi Frankenstein

Frankenstein was a book which was one of the first Sci-Fi books to ever be made.Following the 18th century development of the novel as a literary form, in the early 19th century, Mary Shelley’s books (1818).Books in these times were mostly Sci-Fi because around these times mostly were about aliens,mutants and all other weird creatures.But the one that I am going to talk about is Frankenstein.Frankenstein was a zombie which was put to test.One day a thunderstorm came and struck him while he was in the test and then a beam of lightning struck on Victor Frankenstein’s creauture (zombie) which made him come alive and therefore Victor Frankenstein could not control him because he was uncontrollable and came from the dead.

Attack Of The Cyborg!

We were just eating out at frankie and bernies and all we hear outside is a thud and we just stop and stare at each other as we were confused of what it was but eager to find out what it was.Moses was the first one to leave but deep down he knew he was scared but on the outside as usual trying to act brave.Nelson came after him and then cut through Moses  and Juan because they were too scared and took too long.Nelson then arrived at the edge but looked back at us.He looked back at where he was walking and down he went.The hole was deep and Nelson was stuck down there probably like jelly with a few broken bones.

He shouted,’Go,it’s not safe here!’.We all promised each other from day 1 that we would protect each other’s back as much as we can when its necessary.We lost 2 members as they ran away because of some loud screeching sound.’I will never leave you!Remember you have always been like a brother to me!Im not leaving without you!’,I shouted.

There were only three of us left to help Nelson.As the oldest I thought what was best.I jumped in the hole and went for Nelson.As I was about to grab him to pick him up and bring him a round rock(most probably an asteroid) lifted up.It took me so I slipped and couldn’t catch Nelson.I flew off to places I didn’t know.I tried using my robotic arm as I lost my human arm in a car crash when I was 4 to help me look for anything useful to bring me back to the place that I belong.I landed after a few minutes but then the thing I just realized was that I didn’t have a clue of where I was.The asteroid then exploded and green goo came out but a tiny alien came out with it.As I got closer it got bigger and bigger but then I realized it was big from the start I was just seeing it from a long distance.It opened its big square shaped eyes and with a robotic voice saying,’Target found.’

Before I knew it I almost got my head knocked out of my body.I was like a baseball and a bat because it was trying to kill me.At first I thought that at first it was an alien but it turns out to be that it’s a cyborg with half alien and half cyborg with it therefore having all the powers of the technology I have to use.All I could think about is living and how I couldn’t save Nelson in time before I got taken away by the asteroid and taken to this different world that I don’t even know about or even knew it existed.

Then I had the best idea possible and was here using my technology as I come from the future I used as much defense and protection as possible like if I was an unstoppable cyborg.I was ready I went face to face with the cyborg,I was shaking on the inside but couldn’t show it because I would easily be beaten and will hav put it more confident.I ran up its robotic arms thinking I can do this.Reached the top at the head and then looked for a way to destroy it.Nothing,Nothing at all to do to destroy it.I ran down to the stomach again and there it was clearly seen,the heart,the most sensitive part of its body.I went in cutting my way through to reach the heart cutting through metal parts,leftovers and I was standing right in front of it.I was thinking about the way to destroy it but then realized if it’s made of metal how could I destroy it with a metallic sword?I was there ready to destroy the robotic thing,then thought of destroying it with lava.

It was too late there was no lava close to get to destroy it and there was also no time at all so the only thing I could do was stab the heart.I was in on it,2 centimeters to killing the cyborg and a blade comes.I knew this was my end.

To be continued…

 

Stormbreaker Book Review

Stormbreaker is about a schoolboy called Alex Rider who becomes a spy for MI6.He goes to Cornwall and explores all around as he doesn’t go to school because he likes to act like an agent but undercover so he dresses casually so people don’t recognise him.

In my opinion I would rate this book a 8 out of 10 because it really hooks the reader in by just reading the blurb.Therefore,you would want to read it because it is interesting and you would want to know more about what Alex Rider is doing and where he is going to go.

He doesn’t take his education seriously and acts like he is a grown man which  thinks that he has the perfect job as an undercover spy that travels around the world.He is only 14 and should be practising for his GCSE’s instead of something that isn’t going to help him with anything.

The negative sides of this book is that the setting and characters are set wrong.This is because the characters have too much detail and the setting is hard to picture.Therefore,we find it hard to picture the setting they are in because there is too much detail for the characters and not enough for the setting around them.This is a negative side of what the author did.

The positive is that he made a lot of cliffhangers and made us get hooked into the book.This shows that he has our attention to be able to read the book.

Overall,in my opinion I would say that this authors book about Alex Rider (Book Title:Stormbreaker) would be a solid 8 out of 10.

This is Your Online Domain

Hello and welcome to your personal online journal.

Edutronic has been created to enhance and enrich your learning at the London Nautical School. Its purpose is to provide you with an audience for your work (or work-in-progress) and you have the choice (by altering the ‘visibility’ of your posts) of whether your work on here is visible to the world, or only to your teacher.

Anything you post here in the public domain represents you and thus it’s important that you take care with that decision, but don’t be afraid to publish your work – as the feedback you may get from people at home, your peers and people from around the internet is only likely to enhance it.

Remember you can always access your class blog and all manner of resources through the Edutronic main website – and by all means check out the sites of your peers to see what they’re getting up to as well.

If you have any questions for your teacher, an excellent way to get an answer is to create a new private post on this journal. Your teachers are am notified of any new posts and will reply swiftly to any queries.

Make the most of, and enjoy this new freedom in your English learning!

“There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed.” ― Ernest Hemingway